[DERBY-1207] Derby Server and Administration Guide - Network Server security

• Type: Bug
• Status: Closed
• Priority: Minor
• Resolution: Fixed
• Affects Version/s: 10.1.3.1
• Fix Version/s: 10.1.3.1, 10.2.1.6
• Component/s: Documentation
• Environment: DITA-sourced documentation
• Assignee: Halley Pacheco de Oliveira
• Reporter: Halley Pacheco de Oliveira
• Created: 12/Apr/06 22:11
• Updated: 25/Apr/06 03:51
• Resolved: 25/Apr/06 03:51

Description

In this page is written:

1) A server that is started with the 0.0.0.0 option will listen to client requests that originate from both localhost and from other machines on the network.

-> 0.0.0.0 is the IP address, the option is -h, so in my opinion the sentence should be:

A server that is started with the -h 0.0.0.0 option will listen to client requests that originate from both localhost and from other machines on the network.

2) In addition, administrative commands (for example, org.apache.derby.drda.NetworkServerControl shutdown) can run only on the host where the server was started, even if the server was started with the -h option.

-> In this sentence it seems to me that "However" is better than "In addition", because what these sentence declares is an exception ("even if the server was started with the -h option") of what is declared in the previous sentence, and not a simple addition.

3) <p></p>

-> There a two empty paragraphs in the source file that can be removed.