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  2. DERBY-379

Doc review (CLOSED TO FURTHER COMMENTS): Getting Started with Derby

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    • Improvement
    • Status: Closed
    • Minor
    • Resolution: Fixed
    • None
    • 10.1.1.0
    • Documentation
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    • all

    Description

      This issue tracks comments for the Getting Started with Derby manual. The deadline for posting comments was Tuesday, June 28, noon Pacific time.

      PLEASE DO NOT POST ADDITIONAL COMMENTS TO THIS JIRA ISSUE. If you have additional comments, please open a JIRA issue for a fixin in a future release, as there is not enough time to incorporate additional comments.

      Some guidelines to follow when posting comments to this issue are:

      • Try to make clear and concise comments about what you want changed whenever possible. Provide concrete comments that say "Please change <original> to <modified>" instead of generic comments like "This section needs to be rewritten."
      • If you're reviewing the HTML Files copy, include the URL for the page in the review comment. Obtain the URL like this:
      • highlight the topic in the left frame
      • right click
      • choose "Properties"
      • copy and paste the address in the pop up box.
      • If you're reviewing the PDF copy, in the review comment:
      • Include the page number for the PDF, and indicate whether the number is the PDF sheet number or the printed page number.
      • Include the title of the section that the problem occurs in. If it's in a subsection, try to include the hierarchy of titles.
      • Please don't review the HTML Book copy – it'll be time consuming to match up that copy with the underlying DITA source.

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