Release notes look good in general, like the build environment section.
Under admin it says:
"System procedures have been added for access to diagnostic information ..."
Should be "System tables", not "System procedures"
Under SQL suppport it says:
" Standard datatypes including BLOB and CLOB"
would be good to change to
" Standard datatypes including XML, BLOB and CLOB"
Under JDBC 4.0 Support it has
"If you compile Derby code ... . This Restriction is imposed ..."
I don't believe we should have these two sentences in here. It's not a restriction imposed by the ASF, so it's not relevant.
Also trying to summarize the terms of a licence is always fraught with danger, I don't believe the summary here is correct'.