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Dag H. Wanvik made changes - 16/Apr/09 06:02 PM
Dag H. Wanvik made changes - 16/Apr/09 06:02 PM
Dag H. Wanvik made changes - 16/Apr/09 06:03 PM
Dag, this is a great explanation, but there is a bit of a run-on sentence in it. I'm attaching a second patch (derby-4164-2.diff) that makes a few edits -- I hope it has not changed the meaning of anything. I've also attached the output HTML page, rrefsqljrevoke.html.
Kim Haase made changes - 17/Apr/09 01:29 PM
Thanks for looking at this Kim!
I agree, the wording I used for "execute" was awkward; I was trying to refer to the JDBC "execute" method in order to use a more specific term than "execution", which could possibly be construed as also referring the fetching of rows from the result set/cursor, but thinking about it again, "execution" is better. Your other edits also improve readability. I upload a third version (with HTML for convenience), in which I make the sentence about the result set start a new paragraph, to avoid giving the impression that this description only applies when prepared statements are used; it also holds when direct execution is used, of course. Do you think I would be better to use a separate section to further clarify this?
Dag H. Wanvik made changes - 17/Apr/09 04:58 PM
I don't think you need a separate section, since the title covers open result sets in general -- but it might be helpful to change the sentence to say something like
Once a result set has been returned to the application (by a prepared statement or by direct execution), ... Though I'm not exactly sure what "direct execution" covers -- execution of an ordinary Statement rather than a prepared one? Yes, that's the common usage of "direct execution", cf. e.g. here:
http://msdn.microsoft.com/en-us/library/aa197638(SQL.80).aspx
Uploading patch #4 with your suggested wording, Kim, thanks.
Committed as svn 766177.
Dag H. Wanvik made changes - 17/Apr/09 11:14 PM
Dag H. Wanvik made changes - 17/Apr/09 11:16 PM
Backported to 10.5 docs branch as:
svn merge -c 766177 https://svn.apache.org/repos/asf/db/derby/docs/trunk Committed as svn 766179, closing.
Dag H. Wanvik made changes - 17/Apr/09 11:27 PM
Dag H. Wanvik made changes - 17/Apr/09 11:29 PM
Myrna van Lunteren made changes - 04/May/09 06:21 PM
Myrna van Lunteren made changes - 04/May/09 06:24 PM
Kathey Marsden made changes - 16/Jul/09 09:24 PM
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section.